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Re: Make up a Swear word
My friend and I invented this one while participating in a show called Revenge of the Space Pandas. Weirdness was to be expected during a play like that. "Oh, banunkle," ...
Jan 19, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
As sheer coincidence would have it, I happen to absolutely ADORE strange glowing blue frogs! Actually no. But it's still cool. 8/10
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Infanticide 2 (scene 2)
Infanticide 2 (if you haven't already peeked at the first scene, dear readers, I suggest you do so, but if you have and were thoroughly disgusted and cannot bear to ...
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Ode to Winter
How DARE you! This was a gorgeous literary poem filled with power, simplicity, and truth, and you defile it by snatching it away from its rightful home and sticking it ...
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Bad Pickup Lines
Here are a couple that have served me well. (by which I mean a hard slap in the face) Are you a farmhouse? 'Cause I wanna put my cock in ...
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Ode to Winter
Crap, it's cold. THE END
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: The Messengers: a blip from the middle
Interesting, but I must say it's a little odd, especially for a "blip" from the middle of a book. It almost seems as though you should have placed this in ...
Jan 16, 2010 -
Re: Escaping the Whisper Chpt 1
Little short for a chapter I'd say, but a healthy start, certainly. As a hook this worked quite well, and if you'd do me the honor of sending a little ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Infanticide 2 (scene 1)
Infanticide 2 (there is a two not because I have written a previous installment that you should scour this forum to find, but because I know that if I add ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
High up, crowning the grassy summit of a swelling mount whose sides are wooded near the base with the gnarled trees of the primeval forest stands the old chateau of ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Young Love
I really didn't think this would get as many reviews as it did. Thanks guys!
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Young Love
Thanks for the help! I knew I needed to work on it, but you guys really pointed out what I needed to fix. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it as ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Young Love
When Scott Monroe left the local Ultimart at seven p.m., heads turned. Not because he was incredibly handsome or outlandishly wealthy. In fact, he wasn’t particularly attractive at all, and ...
Sep 30, 2008 -
Re: Fang Grain
Okay, first of all, for an opening for a film, it doesn't give you any insight whatsoever as to what the film is going to be about, so it kind ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Long Live the King- Prologue
Prologue Far, far, away, across a vast landscape of monsters and innocents, incredible dangers and even more incredible truths, spread like a worn and wise map across a table, lies ...
Aug 3, 2008
